Final Paper Update

The final paper is going about as well as I expected it would thus far. My initial proposal for the paper was to talk about how teenage driving is a detriment. I have since revised this idea for several reasons. Firstly I know that teen driving is not neccessarily a bad thing, only when abused. Secondly, Ms Williams comments were very insightful in revealing how weak an arguement it would be. So I have since revised it to "Teenage driving is an aspect of modern culture in the United States that, while in certain cases is severely abused, has actually made great strides and progress." Or something along those lines. The outline I have started for it is also helping to build my arguement.